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The aboriginal hum of the shaman hangs in the air. The drum begins to beat, its stretched leather reverberating into the hollow of my being. This morning my muse is a Maasai Warrior. His feet thud into the earthen clay below my own. He is dancing, with strength, yet ever so gracefully. Each move conjures spirits from the lifetimes beyond this consciousness. I watch as the ethereal rain lights up in the sky. The thunder strikes in rhythm with the chaos of the drums that make the air alive with ferocity. My heart beats faster, lightening dives into the earth, and my own feet begin to dance. Our bodies are covered with the luminous liquid of Father Sky. His back is bare, and each sinewy muscle is harmonizing under the moon light. My hair is slick and slaps against my shoulders as my body rises and falls with the throbbing of the drums. Legs are splattered with mud, as we thump out the tune of war. My body screams into the night! It is not rage that drives us, it is shear passion! The ground begins to shake in rapturous tremors with the roaring of the sky. And here we are, caught in this ravenous hunger, this wild and uninhibited vortex of raw being where the layer between the worlds is thinning…

But that was this morning…

I wonder what awaits me tonight.
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[link] to Scarlett Letters' Magical Muse Contest...

Check him out here :iconscarlettletters:

What I would really like to do is have a collection of daily muses over a week, like short journal entries for each day, and then submit them as a whole for the contest... but you know honestly I get so wrapped up in them that I don't think they will flow nicely together. I feel like they each will have their own energy.

This is the first, or Monday's Muse...

Critique Greatly Appreciated...

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:icon0dd10ut:
That was a great read! Hmm... critique. I don't know about everyone else, but as I was reading, I had imagined a dark, and stormy night. The sky completely filled with clouds, and so when I hit the part about the muscles under the moonlight, I was thrown off a bit because in my mind, the moon was blocked off. I guess there's nothing you could do about that though, and I don't really know if that's a critique...

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:iconwangocopperboom:
Very beautifully written! I love that there is something about African culture on here, it's usually so overlooked!

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thank you so much

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hmmm maybe a moon peaking through the clouds?

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:icon0dd10ut:
XD Yes, that's it.

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Thanks for a great entry!

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:iconscarlettletters:
Thanks for a great entry!

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You've been featured here. :heart:
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awesome :) thank you

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